Research spearheaded by the Cedars - Sinai Medical Center in the United States has unveiled a groundbreaking RNA drug, TY1. This innovative drug has the remarkable ability to trigger the body's inherent DNA repair mechanism. It achieves this by boosting the activity of the TREX1 gene. As a result, there is a significant increase in the quantity of immune cells that are proficient in DNA repair. In the context of heart - related issues, this drug can effectively reverse tissue damage and minimize the formation of cardiac scars following heart attacks. Its efficacy isn't limited to cardiac conditions; it also shows promise in the treatment of autoimmune diseases. At present, comprehensive clinical trials for this drug are in the planning stages.
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